| Name: Samia |
4th November 2011 |
I feel the myth should be a bit more adventurous
But well done!
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| Name: Emily |
12th November 2011 |
| I think the myth was brilliant! Well done Tanner!
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| Name: Caitlyn |
13th November 2011 |
| I love this story! It has a great level of suspense!
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| Name: Sage |
19th November 2011 |
| best thing i've ever read,and I like reading!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Name: Martha |
22nd November 2011 |
| wow that is a verry verry verry lon story but is it a prince or a boy called phineas?!
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| Name: Callum |
23rd November 2011 |
| I thought it was quite good and also I thought the bit at the end was quite good as well.
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| Name: DANE |
26th November 2011 |
| wow a very long story,but really good,i'm giving it 5 out of 5
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| Name: Ehelsan |
29th November 2011 |
| it was a fantastic stories and i loved the stories
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| Name: Chloe |
11th January 2012 |
i like to make stories so i wold like to make one creative storie on here and i hope youre looking forward to you reading this storie
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| Name: Pandora446 |
29th July 2012 |
| fantastic stor one of the best story of the year!
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| Name: Ryan |
1st September 2012 |
| good thought could have been a little longer 4/5
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| Name: Ellie And Jaspreet |
5th December 2012 |
| This is a great adventure story but there wasn\'t a struggle to solve the problem therefore it could be better.
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| Name: Ben,kiera And Jamielea |
5th December 2012 |
| it was a great story,i could picture all the things you discribed and well done on a very good story
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| Name: Courtney,Elysia And Megan |
5th December 2012 |
| very interesting, but a bit too much information. furthermore, we belive this is the best myth of the year!It had lots of varied sentences.could have more speech.
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