| Name: Lauren |
15th May 2007 |
| what was under the water and why did it want the treasure chest?
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| Name: Diane |
15th May 2007 |
| I think this is part of the mystery, nobody really knows. What do you think?
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| Name: Oak Island Treasure |
9th October 2007 |
Hello,
I really enjoyed this story! I run Oak Island Treasure, a website dedicated to the mysterious Money Pit mystery in Nova Scotia Canada. It is similar to your legend of Callow Pit and I think you might be interested in reading up on the tale.
Visit http://www.oakislandtreasure.co.uk for all the latest news - yes, people are still trying to recover the treasure from the booby trapped pit!
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| Name: Niamh |
23rd September 2009 |
| i thought the story was abit short but it was still really good
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| Name: Lewis Wood |
11th November 2009 |
| reel ace but can you make it a little longer plz and email me if you want me to make any story's lewiswd300@googlemail.com
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| Name: Dolly |
12th November 2009 |
| cool and ace but if you could make it a little longer
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| Name: Holly |
22nd June 2010 |
i like this story it is very funny and sad
hollly
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| Name: Holly |
30th July 2010 |
this is a great tale i love scary stories
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| Name: Gabriel |
2nd September 2010 |
| the devil put his hand out of the pit awsome
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| Name: Rimsha |
20th September 2010 |
| I LOVED TH BIT, WHEN DEVIL HOLD THERE HAND! But i think it was a bit sourt! 3 stars!
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| Name: Rimsha |
22nd September 2010 |
| I like it but, it was too short!
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| Name: FizaNoor |
25th September 2010 |
Wow!!!That was awesome.The devil put his hand out of the pit.My hart was pupping fast and fast when I saw the devil's hand.
I knew nothing about what was going to happen.
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| Name: Olivia Page |
29th September 2010 |
| It was okay but it didn't scare me and it was to short
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| Name: Marie |
28th November 2010 |
| It was so coolllllllllllllllll that I like the bit when the boys got the treaerse I give it 8 out of 10 beacuse it was to shot.
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| Name: Max |
7th July 2011 |
| I liked the Devil part , but not to upset you , but I think it would be cooler if there was a whirlpool instead of the Devil , and how could the Devil reach out if the pit was about 3ft deep?!
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| Name: Camelia |
3rd November 2011 |
| i loved it great story i like the part where the devil takes the treasure imazing but i think the story is a bit to short but well done 7/10 great job!!!!
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| Name: Tadhg |
22nd February 2012 |
| I enjoyed this story. I would have liked it to have been a bit longer.
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