| Name: Lucy |
9th December 2011 |
| An exceptional mythical story including ambitious vocab and a superb beginning, middle and end. The ending connects the beginning and everything is written perfectly. Everything is ticked from the interesting auther check list. Well done!! By the way, I would love a few extra paragraphs!!
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| Name: Talia |
10th December 2011 |
| it was good but i would love to read more!
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| Name: Luke |
13th December 2011 |
| Gian, great story, brilliant use of imagery, I enjoyed reading this and considering your 10 years old and producing work of this high standard, it gives us authors something to worry about!
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| Name: Thomas |
13th December 2011 |
| An exceptional, well written 'grab your attention' story with a beautifully written use of imagery and words, any more paragraphs would have made this story too long and you managed to wrap the beginning, middle and the end remarkably well.
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| Name: Ema |
14th December 2011 |
| that was.... was...was... AMAZING ONLY IF U COULD HAVE MORE RATINGS I WOULD GIVE U 1000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM NOT JOKING I WOULD CAUSE THAT STORY MADE ME SHIVER SO MUSH I NEARLY FELL OF THE CHAIR and it was amazing and i want moreeeeeee !!!!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxxxxx
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| Name: Fatimah |
23rd December 2011 |
this was an amazing story!
can i use some parts for my own story?
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| Name: Rebecca |
24th December 2011 |
| It made me shiver!(that is a good thing)! I want MMMMMMMOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEEE
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| Name: Adam |
27th December 2011 |
| I LOVE IT!I WANT MMMMMMMOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRREEEE
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| Name: Vicky2011xxx |
31st December 2011 |
| Good Story but the thing that i dont get is how can a ghost lift up children
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| Name: Halima |
24th January 2012 |
| i so want to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Name: Alyna |
28th January 2012 |
It's really good
p.s You can do another and i know you can do it much spookier.
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| Name: Vale |
30th January 2012 |
| This is AWESOME!, I felt like if I was IN the story, you should make more and MUCH MORE spookier, I LOVED it!!! =)
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| Name: Sylvie Dulson |
3rd February 2012 |
| I am a English Literture student and this is amazing, so much in it and the tension is very good. All they way throught I cringed and I love the description, great vocabalury.
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| Name: Libby |
8th February 2012 |
| I LOOOVEDDD this story! It was so freaky,that i did not waant to read on,but,of course I read on,other-wise, I would not be commenting!
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| Name: Harley Line |
10th February 2012 |
| This is awesome right keep making some up bruv xxxxxxxxxx
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| Name: Nato1 |
10th February 2012 |
| It's really cool! I like the description! Keep up the good work!
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| Name: Lila157 |
13th February 2012 |
| WOW! I lurv it! Plz write a sequel!x :
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| Name: Ella |
15th February 2012 |
| i really love it.I want some more.The discription is very very very good and i used some for my myth in school and read it in our class asembly.thankyou for diong these story i would like some more spookie one pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeas!!!
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| Name: Najma |
17th February 2012 |
| this is a very nice game
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| Name: Oprincess7 |
22nd February 2012 |
| that story was amazing, but freaky! plzzzzz write another one and i really want to know if anyone does find the mysterious figure???
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| Name: Megan |
26th February 2012 |
| OMG! that was soooo realistic that should be a Published book......
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| Name: Ali |
3rd March 2012 |
| goooooooooooooooooooooooood book or stoyyyyyyyyy
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| Name: Alice |
4th March 2012 |
| that was awsome! but im sure ive heard it before!
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| Name: Diamonde |
9th March 2012 |
| I've heard that before! Still, Great effort!!
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| Name: James |
17th March 2012 |
| this was abit good but it would of been beter if you made it on story creater 2
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| Name: Courtney |
19th March 2012 |
| Hi i like the story scary and great please make a another :) :) :)
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| Name: Rachael |
24th March 2012 |
| Wow! That was awesome it was really good!
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| Name: Anna |
26th March 2012 |
Pretty good!
I wonder if they've written any other stories?
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| Name: Molly |
30th March 2012 |
| It was amazing,however I foun some mistakes. But it is very good.
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| Name: Libby |
31st March 2012 |
| wow that was really good and freaky
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| Name: Morgan Hardman |
1st April 2012 |
| WOW! Gr8 story. Ive got a better idea for the ending though. The man could of kept the children captive until the police came to search the house two years later
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| Name: Lolo |
1st April 2012 |
gooooddddddd read mine too its called wolf boy
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| Name: Kezi |
8th April 2012 |
| this was a great story thanks xxxxx
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| Name: Keisha |
10th April 2012 |
| Very exciting have they done anymore its a good story, wait not good SPECTACULARLY AWESOME!
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| Name: Noga |
15th April 2012 |
| I really liked this story, it was well put together with an interesting and intense flow. I nominate GianC for the Nobel Prize!
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| Name: Stuff |
26th April 2012 |
I thought that the actual layout was good, and the story idea was great! The only thing I would say is that if you just found out that your daughter is trapped in an old, spooky house with a freak, you wouldn't really say "Don't worry love"
Overall, great x
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| Name: Jay |
28th April 2012 |
| Good a lot of imagination
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| Name: Alic |
2nd May 2012 |
| Awesome story dude, just what i was looking for!
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| Name: Jade |
3rd May 2012 |
this is an awesome story.I\'d love you to write more
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| Name: Jorga |
10th May 2012 |
I think I`m scared to death now! But hey I love pettrifing things!!!!
I would love that to happen to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Name: Jasmin |
14th May 2012 |
| Awesome i love it ! really scary !!
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| Name: Zainab |
18th May 2012 |
this story is great it is better than other story well done
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| Name: Lauren |
4th June 2012 |
| I thought it was good discriptive writing
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| Name: BOB |
7th June 2012 |
| COOL HILARIOUS I TOTALLY UNDERSTAND INTERESTING AWESOME BUT.................. STUPID
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| Name: Ella |
8th June 2012 |
| I love that story. II want tothank the person who made it
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| Name: Sophia :) |
13th June 2012 |
| Interesting but scary :P very good discription though
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| Name: Ema |
15th June 2012 |
| Cool !!! xxx ♥ I was scared the frist time !!! But its fine now xxx ♥
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| Name: Lorna |
22nd June 2012 |
Apsalutley loved it better then any of my stories :@)
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| Name: Stella |
6th July 2012 |
lol
best story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!
they should make more stories like this!
nice story Gianc!!!!!!!
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| Name: Milly |
8th July 2012 |
| It was good but it\'s a mystery at the end and I want to now if they caught him.
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| Name: Alina |
14th August 2012 |
| That was a great story.A bit spooky and would be better as a movie.
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| Name: Areisah |
24th August 2012 |
| your story is really fun fun i want to read MORE.
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| Name: Megan |
26th August 2012 |
| Like the story but, it was too short and had a little less describtion on how the man looked! but still it is a good story. :)
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| Name: Jordan |
29th August 2012 |
| I love it its imaginative and inteeresting
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| Name: Amy |
3rd September 2012 |
| love it but i couldnt get a image in my head
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| Name: Morgan |
16th September 2012 |
| I think this story is really good and you have good imagenery
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| Name: Jessica |
16th September 2012 |
| its was good and very imaginative however i could get a picture of the real story in my head maybe or picture-istic words to help picture the scene in my head
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| Name: Lulu |
28th September 2012 |
| This story is fantastic i love your imagination you need to become a storywriter good job and if you like writing stories dont stop you should really make more ;)
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| Name: Naomi |
19th October 2012 |
| This was absolutely brilliant. Icould picture everything you said in my head. I think this story deserves to be put into a well earned published book.
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| Name: Priya |
30th October 2012 |
| WOW I TOTALLY AGREE WITH LULU CARRY ON WRITING!!!
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| Name: Loisea |
6th November 2012 |
| Ithink it is a good story but i would of made up the name myself.
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| Name: Riley |
7th November 2012 |
| its realy cool i loved it i hope you do more
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| Name: Jordi |
11th November 2012 |
| Good storyline with an unexpected twist! But i think you could have shortened some of your sentences and prehaps described the situation a little more. All in all, great description and interesting idea, i could have kept reading! ;)
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| Name: Random |
7th December 2012 |
| What an awesome story - inspires me to write more often!
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| Name: Ellanor |
21st December 2012 |
| i loved the story im definitely a fan whoa i love it it just caught my attention im fascinated
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| Name: Lolage |
21st December 2012 |
| that was a awesome story it was quite scary too i think you should make more stories i tihnk they will be just as good
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| Name: Shannon |
2nd February 2013 |
Well that was a good story which is good for telling on Halloween so tell it on Halloween ok.make more stories and remember
YOU ARE SO GREAT well done to GianC
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| Name: Lucy |
7th February 2013 |
It was a realy scary story freaked me out neerly al of the way threw it.
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| Name: Coolguy |
11th February 2013 |
| It was a brilliant story and because you used lots of descriptive verbs the story was fantastic! Keep it up!!!
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| Name: Emily |
22nd February 2013 |
| scaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrryyyyyy
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| Name: Courtney |
4th March 2013 |
| wow brilliant story you are the best can ya post somw more cos they are awesome you should be an author you are that good well done and congratulations bravo bravo mbravo
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| Name: Clo |
5th March 2013 |
| that picture is sooooooooooooooooo scary:0
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| Name: Angelica Kissme |
10th March 2013 |
| awe this was really good but why is there a picture of a guy like that he isnt scary but whteva it was (kinda) good
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| Name: Alex |
19th March 2013 |
that was a really great story
excellent job
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| Name: Ben Cowlrick |
26th March 2013 |
| cool myth guy lo xd xd xd xd lol lol lol lol lol xd xd xd xd
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| Name: Mia |
30th March 2013 |
| That's amazing. No mistakes or any spelling errors. That was a fantastic showcase. Well Done!
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| Name: Bryan |
10th April 2013 |
was that a real myth?
well, it was really good!!
BRAVO!!!
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| Name: Alysha |
11th April 2013 |
| Excelant!!!! That was so so good!!!!!!!!!!
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| Name: Sarah |
13th April 2013 |
| That was a very good story.
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| Name: Caleb |
23rd April 2013 |
| Awesome, perfect, absoluetly amazing. No problems a tall!!!!
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| Name: Chloe |
27th April 2013 |
| well done this story is awesome.
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| Name: Elli Rebecca Barrott |
12th May 2013 |
| All i have to say about this story is... BRILLIANT! That story sent shivers down my spine the whole time, i almost felt like i was going to fall off my chair, well done.
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| Name: Ella |
17th May 2013 |
| this is a program from cbbc not a made up one
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| Name: Nice |
18th May 2013 |
| i love the picture and also the story you had really tried hard.
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| Name: Gorgeous |
21st May 2013 |
| congrats because makes an interesting story ^^
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| Name: Victoria Hazelwood |
5th June 2013 |
| This is a amazing story!!!! You should read this as it has great adjectives, and words so good I had to google the meaning!!!! (I mean that in a good way!)You should be really proud and I bet one day you will be a fantastic story writer!!! :)
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| Name: Emily |
8th June 2013 |
| great story. really interesting and straightforward.
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