I like this story because it's short and sweet and i like the bit about the sun being a lamp! But if the sun was a lamp think how big that wizard was!!!!!!
This is a really clever idea I will think of your story ever night and if I were you then I would be very proud of yourself because you have a good imagination?
I really like this story it is very short and very imaginative but i think it would be better if you make it a bit more scary so it could match the title
"NIGHT"."carry on the clever work".