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Name: Fitzc7890 1st May 2012
* = I really liked how creative your story was
* = It was really funny
wish = I wish you would make your story longer and make it more interesting by adding more details. Also take a look at the sentence: "Fit grew the biggest fit and was stomping around everywhere." I think you could change the words to make it more clear.
Name: AUNTIE SUE 7th June 2012
WOW! WHAT A GREAT STORY! I REALLY ENJOYED READING ABOUT THE RHINOS! WELL, DON'T FORGET TO SAY HELLO TO MARY, OK?

WITH LOVE FROM,
AUNTIE SUE
Name: BARRY 7th June 2012
HI JONATHON!
GOOD WORK! I ENCOURAGE YOU TO BE A STORY WRITER WHEN YOU GROW UP!

I ENJOYED READING YOUR INTERESTING STORY.

 

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