This is a spectacular piece of writing !!! I really enjoyed reading it and loved the lesson taught between the words and the value of the moral, keep the good work and Isa u'll grow up into a great writer;)
Fatima, this is not a compliment by no means, but this is so good. And as a matter of fact, the last sentence you wrote is adorable and I'm going to share it with my friends... Keep it up and will always love to read what you write :)