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The Hungry Dragon


Name: Paige 21st March 2013
This is great but, in a few parts of the story you have accidently mixed up the future/past tences e.g..
belonged to a beautiful princess with ocean blue eyes and dark brown (hear)---(hair) that (swishes) around every time she walked. i give it 4/5

 

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