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The Willow Pattern Story


Name: Courtney 7th May 2013
Good
Name: Kara 7th May 2013
Very good !!!
Name: Charlie 27th May 2013
Awesome!
Name: Shirley 25th August 2013
A nice story but the first sentence of the second paragraph doesn't seem to make sense: "The king...decided to pay an old lord..."Surely the old lord was to pay him for his daughter. Perhaps you mean 'pay attention to...'. The name sou-yang needs a capital 'S'
Name: Shirley 25th August 2013
Comment cont. You could do with a couple more stops and new sentences too, and commas here and there.E.g. "...old lord named Sou-yang. Sou-yang was rich...". Also "...Chang had plans of his own. Dressed as a bus boy,..." Shouldn't the 2 lovers marry first and then live happily...? Or is this meant to be modern behaviour? Commas would help in "So, as you would think, it was in the king's impure nature to agree."
Name: Bob 21st January 2014
EPIC
Name: Bob 21st January 2014
The no one speaks is a bit scary
Name: Milly 21st January 2014
great story used it for my work!
Name: Milly 21st January 2014
used it for my work!
Name: Ella 27th June 2014
Great story I used it for work

 

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