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The Mermaid and the Octopus


Name: Ellie 15th March 2015
I think this story is good but I spotted some mistaked that's why im rating it.... 4/5
Name: Nina 23rd March 2015
This story didn't make me want to read on and instead of adding detail you kind of just skipped to the main points and if I'm honest, it was very difficult to picture in my mind but I rated it 2/5
Name: Luke Mcseveney 28th March 2015
It is a wonder full
story
Name: Seila 5th May 2015
it\\\'s awesome how did u get them i ideas???
LOVE IT!!!
Name: Usain3 27th May 2015
It is hard to believe fhis storry.
Name: Katie 8th June 2015
wow people are proud of it what a wonderful story....
Name: Katie 25th October 2015
i like the story very good .
Name: Karin 8th December 2015
good effert
Name: April 22nd February 2016
I like the way that you added vocabulary. Thanks for letting me read your story.
Name: Michelle 23rd February 2016
I like it but I think 1o stars
Name: Bella 5th April 2016
It was ok.
Name: Rosa 17th April 2016
It was good
Name: Layton 1st July 2016
it was good but a bit more would be better
Name: Evie M C 15th November 2016
good but, if you improve it, it would be so amazing!
i enjoyed writing long stories about mermaids when i was two years old. use more adjectives
Name: Evie M C 23rd December 2016
Claim what was hers? Freaky octopus cave?
Name: Rachael 1st February 2017
Your story ending was a bit muddled but good use of commas and ly words!
Name: Gavin 15th May 2017
cool but add more stuff to the story
Name: Casey 20th September 2017
Weird short but I don't understand how she got her tailπŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ πŸ¬πŸŸπŸ³πŸ‹And mermaids haven't been claimed realπŸŒπŸŒŽπŸŒπŸŒ•πŸŒžβ­οΈπŸ’«πŸŒ€β›…οΈπŸŒ₯πŸŒ¦β˜οΈπŸŒ§β›ˆπŸŒ©βš‘οΈβ„οΈβ›„οΈβ˜ƒ
Name: Micah 6th November 2017
it is quite intresting

 

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