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| Name: Jasyendy |
16th December 2009 |
| This is the best! Why didnt they put his sandle on his foot at the first place? Because there would'nt of had been a hooded ghost. Or maybe i'm wrong.
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| Name: Chill 14 |
26th January 2010 |
| I really liked it but after he realized what had happend he should have put on the sandle ... at the end of the story~!
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| Name: Hannah |
30th January 2010 |
| Why didn't they put the sandle on this story is HANTUINGLY GREAT!!!! (MOAN!!)
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| Name: Suzanna |
15th November 2010 |
| I think that it was good that it said it sounded like...... sandals
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| Name: Olivia |
24th November 2010 |
| This story was reallygood and to be honest ghost stories are like...........one of the best myths!
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| Name: Rebecca Green |
11th December 2010 |
| I think this story is just like so awesome it is just spooky and that is what myths and legends is made for kk xx
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| Name: Kishan |
12th January 2011 |
| I quite like this story, its maybe not as good as some others I have heard. Its also very mysterious and makes you think who it is and also how they got in! It is a little bit creepy too, also it uses good sound effects.
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| Name: Fraser |
12th January 2011 |
| That was truely awesome. It was actually quite terrifying because of when the monk haunted the church. I've heard loads of spook stories and have never heard anything like this. Maybe this could be true, you never know. And again, it was really cool.
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| Name: Conor |
12th January 2011 |
| This story really pulled me in and urged me to read on. I think this story is really interesting and somehow really eerie!This my favourite story yet!
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| Name: Matthew |
12th January 2011 |
This was immense because it starts all spooky until you start to guess who it is.
It isn't just fantasy your'e also learning about the medieval times.
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| Name: Rosa |
12th January 2011 |
| This story is really good I like it at the end when they told the story that it was Rahere who was hanting the church! I really liked that bit and I liked the bit were they were telling the story of rahere. I was so scared I didnt want to look! but it was very descriptive and amazing!
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| Name: James |
12th January 2011 |
| That story makes me feel like there's a ghost watching my every move! It's almost like in a minute I'll be in a tomb all alone. This story was frightening me all the way through, but it was one of the best legends I've ever read! I think I'll have trouble sleeping tonight!
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| Name: Rachel |
12th January 2011 |
| Wow, this is the most scary thing I have ever heard of and when I go to church I willcheck the floor every foot-step,and I think if I saw those foot-steps in church I would faint.
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| Name: Anna |
12th January 2011 |
| That was TERRIFIC!!!If I was in that church I would be petrified! I like all of the story, I feel like I want to read it again!
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| Name: Catriona |
12th January 2011 |
| I think that it is a mystery nightmare , it was very freaky because your'e attacking a church and what if someone finds you, you will get charged or even put in jail.
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| Name: Beth |
12th January 2011 |
| I thought that was really amazing and I liked the bit at the end when he said he was wearing sandals. Some of it was quite scary like the grey footprints and I would be quite scared if I was in the church!! Rahere's shadow was quite terrifying aswell! It was weird how he stole his sandle though!!
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| Name: Harry |
12th January 2011 |
| This story got a bit boring at times like when they went on about the sandals that was boring. But the good was that it used some good words, adjectives and adverbs. I would say it was a legend because there is no magic in the story so it, can't be a myth so it's a legend.
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| Name: Amy |
12th January 2011 |
| This myth is the most terrifying story I have ever heard! Especially at the end when he haunts the church.
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| Name: Bobby |
12th January 2011 |
| This is amazing! I particularly like the part when he enter's the church and hears footsteps and then as he tried to go away from the church, the police arrived and everything was fine. (The alarm people said the same).
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| Name: Patrick |
12th January 2011 |
| I think it was really good especialy when the creepy footsteps came walking up the wooden floor"I think those type of myths our the best because they our really intresting!!!!!!!!
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| Name: Ayesha |
12th January 2011 |
I really enjoyed this myth because it's full of mystery and eagerness-but the sandals were the best bit!I think that
its very strange though.Still,that was still a pretty well-written myth because it was very spooky and frightening.
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| Name: Julius |
12th January 2011 |
| It was quite scary, but also exciting because I wanted to find out what was making the footsteps.
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| Name: Ellie And Jim |
19th January 2011 |
| We go to school near that church...... but we don\'t believe in ghosts! Why would anyone want to open a tomb?
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| Name: Bethany M |
20th January 2011 |
| Well that was cind of scary! but not really.At school we all when in to the ict room and when on this it has lots of storys to.
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| Name: Bethany Blue |
20th January 2011 |
| They just make these storys a just telling you storys they are good but that is why they are on myths and legends kkxx
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| Name: Sam |
26th January 2011 |
| it doesnt sound true but it is ibecouse iremembe my older sister telling me about it then i read this story and she told me the same story in 2008.
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| Name: Megan |
2nd February 2011 |
| Me and my dad saw this story and now my dad's always scaring me by saying he can hear some one with sandals!
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| Name: Adria Montia Pitre |
2nd February 2011 |
| i love this story. it is educational and i understand it as well. because we are in writing and in writig we are creating our on myths.
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| Name: Rufaydah |
5th February 2011 |
i liked this story but i do not understand how the man with the slippers died
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| Name: Lola |
21st February 2011 |
| Brilliant at start got bad in the end! sad face for that!
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| Name: Hanan |
22nd March 2011 |
| to come with a story of yours, it can encourage others to be such like you. thank you for writing such a motivating story.
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| Name: Samaira |
27th May 2011 |
| their was once a boy called joe he visited the haunted house but he really didnt know it was a haunted house so he decided to go inside but then a lady came up to him and said how can i help you but she was strange looking which was quit unuaual........
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| Name: Riham |
1st September 2011 |
I don't belive in spirits hauting. And I have heard people saying if you say that they will haunt you!!!!!!.......
So far I haven't been hauted!
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| Name: Victoria |
25th March 2012 |
| i kinda beleive in ghosts but kinda dont and bloody mary is a load of rubbish
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| Name: AJ |
11th May 2012 |
| this is brill i rate it 5 star
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| Name: Mary And Sarah |
19th June 2012 |
| I see a ghost b4 I was in the toilet and i was looking for my friend and i opened all the doors and none was there then i was gonna walk out and one of the doors shut and locked by its self !
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| Name: Jay |
3rd September 2012 |
| this is very good
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| Name: Olaf |
11th October 2012 |
| this storys not that scary
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| Name: JessieBelle |
20th October 2012 |
| :\'( this scared me because of the black figure on one of the animations......
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| Name: Nicole |
16th December 2012 |
| i love this story and i always will
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| Name: Armaani |
7th February 2013 |
Wicked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! amazing use of imagination!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved it and always will. keep on commenting folks. no-one would not like it
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| Name: Jack |
20th April 2013 |
| i had a nightmare about this story... very scary.
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| Name: Regan |
15th May 2013 |
That story was a liitle bit scary.
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