| Name: Amy |
2nd November 2008 |
| WOW The Fire Faries are pretty mean or arnt't they????????????
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| Name: Lily |
4th November 2008 |
| it is a nice story but a bit too short
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| Name: Year 5 |
5th November 2008 |
| It was a lovely story-we thought it was 'fairytastic!'
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| Name: Co Co |
5th November 2008 |
| i love it but its to long and silly and it is brilliant
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| Name: KIRSTY |
6th November 2008 |
It was a lovely story-we thought it was 'fairytastic!
I LOVED YOU STORY I THOUGTH IT WAS GREAT
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| Name: Lizzi |
9th November 2008 |
| i absolutely loved this story and so did my little girl i read it to her every night before bed she is obsessed with the stuff thank you and well done x
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| Name: Abigail |
9th November 2008 |
This story was planed well. well done 2 the writter with some fab vocab (vocabulary) I cant wait 2 here some more storys from u u might just make a writer when ur older!
good look 4 other storys and i rate u a fab 10/10 xxx
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| Name: Louise |
10th November 2008 |
| gd story i thourght it was brill
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| Name: Elizabeth |
12th November 2008 |
thank you all who left comments,its nice to know you all liked it.And yes there is another story on its way!!!
may be a little longer this time.
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| Name: Shannon |
12th November 2008 |
| that was fab how did you get so good ideas
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| Name: Amy |
16th November 2008 |
| FAB SUPER AMAZING SUPERDOOPER
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| Name: Emily |
19th November 2008 |
| that is brilliant you are a great story teller!
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| Name: Megan |
20th November 2008 |
So gud u were so kool lol
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| Name: Radhika Popat |
21st November 2008 |
| I absoloutley loved the way you left the storie in suspence
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| Name: Chloe |
22nd November 2008 |
| its good and its really about keeping a secret and belief. i luv the story u should be the second j.k rowling
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| Name: Aalliah |
25th November 2008 |
this story is so coooolll!!!!!!!!!!! and it aint often u hear me say that you should publish books when u r older
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| Name: James |
25th November 2008 |
| I liked this, thanks for making it
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| Name: JEN |
28th November 2008 |
| wow wow wow wow wow!
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| Name: Chloe |
28th November 2008 |
| your story is ok but i would have done much beter
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| Name: Elizabeth |
28th November 2008 |
| dear chloe.if you can do much better why isnt one of your storys in show case.maybe you need to concentrate more on your own storys rather than saying you can do better than other people.
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| Name: Me |
2nd December 2008 |
good thing well done
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| Name: Lucy |
3rd December 2008 |
i really enjoyed that story thanks
for sharing it with us
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| Name: Anyesha |
5th December 2008 |
| i love it especillay when they meet the faries!
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| Name: Ellie |
5th December 2008 |
| i liked the part when they found the fire fairys.
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| Name: Estel |
7th January 2009 |
I think its agreat story but the thing is...theres no proof that they are real,
but i will try it any way.
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| Name: Kim V |
9th February 2009 |
| I like your story, I haven't done many but yours is fab.
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| Name: Radhika Popat Class 5r |
17th February 2009 |
| i just love myths and legends.i think this is one of the best and is also in my top10 favourite myths. sorry,got to go now,my little brother is pestering me ALOT so ........................guess this is bye
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| Name: Rachel Grace Kemp |
10th March 2009 |
| i loved it loads i would never ever be able to make story as good as this i am 11 and really loved it i hope i see another great story from you
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| Name: Bobo |
12th January 2013 |
FARIES ARE REAL
If you believe in something so strong it will come true.
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