| Name: Mrs Stantley |
12th November 2008 |
| Super story Lilah, and well done for being brave enough to put it on the site and share it with others. - Mrs Stantley
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| Name: Katherine Lammas |
19th November 2008 |
| Very good story lilah. I enjoyed it alot.Can't Wait to see it in the SHOW CASE.
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| Name: Elizabeth |
9th December 2008 |
| what a fab story i really liked it what a good imagination you have.Well done.
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| Name: Poppy K |
12th December 2008 |
| i really liked yur story plse write another
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| Name: Caitlin |
13th December 2008 |
| i had a look i liked it it is fab
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| Name: Coli |
18th December 2008 |
| hey u'r story was awsome
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| Name: Bhy |
28th December 2008 |
| I think your story could have been better.
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| Name: Liam |
28th December 2008 |
| Superb brill, well done, best on site
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| Name: Tamsin |
28th December 2008 |
| What a well thought out story - well done
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| Name: Rosie |
1st January 2009 |
| very good piece of writing very beliveable well done and i hear you come from new yourk city i had been there before it was brtllant i loved the shops and the statue and the empire state
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| Name: Amber |
7th January 2009 |
Woah, this story is the best ever! You should be an author, y'know! I wish I could write stories as good as yours!
Well done!
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| Name: Sam |
8th January 2009 |
| WOAH , thay one was awesome! WE LOVE YOU LILAH, story wise?
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| Name: Maggie Beale |
12th January 2009 |
| I am a primary school teacher n London. I like the peer-feedback to these stories.
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| Name: Megan Clegg |
19th January 2009 |
| Wow great story i really think you have a good fairytale imagination keep it up keep writing stories.
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| Name: Elisha |
19th January 2009 |
| it was a good story but i think it could have a bit more detail!
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| Name: Ewen Aaron |
26th February 2011 |
i thought it was briliant i liked it so much i showed my mum
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| Name: .,diana |
28th November 2012 |
| so far, its a good story! it gives lesson.
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