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Name: Sophie 20th January 2009
this story is soooo the best ever in the world yes it is welldone and i give as a prize a comment saying you are the best in the world yes you are.
Name: XEllax 20th January 2009
Hi your story is soooooo cool !
Name: XEllax 20th January 2009
I know i have already commented but this is to my freind sophie (Hi)
Name: Harry 20th January 2009
Your story is good
Name: Harry 20th January 2009
your story makes alot of sense
Name: Your Friend 24th July 2009
this story is awsom i love the end!!!
Name: Your Friend 24th July 2009
i love your story its sooo clever
Name: Newzealander 28th July 2009
what a short story but fantastic its so little but hey it is meaningful it makes a headstart for me at school cause our topic is myths and legends and this gives me an idea cause im not that good cause im only 11 my rating 5
Name: Sophie 6th August 2009
totally cool
Name: Tiara Kunder 21st August 2009
It Was Great Justine I Would Like To Write A Story Like You.
Name: Alyra 21st August 2009
Justine I Loved Your Story It Was Sooooo Nice I Can't Tell You.***************
Name: Christopher 25th August 2009
good y have common sence
Name: Katy 29th August 2009
it was a good story
Name: Stella 4th September 2009
good, but too short
Name: Oog Oog 5th September 2009
it it short and str8 to the point gr8
Name: Charlie 10th September 2009
it is short
Name: Froghog30 10th September 2009
it was short but it has a good meaning
Name: [!"no*drama*zone"!] 18th September 2009
this story waz so great i loved it
Name: Chopstick 25th September 2009
i cried (NOT) i liked the storey but it was 2 short!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Name: Jordan 28th September 2009
look it made alot of common sence. XD
Name: Ellie 1st October 2009
it was a little bit shot but it was a good story
Name: Ellie 1st October 2009
this sory was so great i loved it.
Name: Catherine 4th October 2009
I liked this story but I would have liked it more interesting (no offence)
Name: Amanda 5th October 2009
good story, really enjoyed it!!!
Name: Morgan 6th October 2009
I liked this story but I don't understand why chopping yourself up would give other people common sense.
If he had common sense himself he wouldn't of chopped himself up!
Name: Natalia 10th October 2009
i realy dont like this
Name: Olivia 10th October 2009
It was good,but I don't get why he asked Athena to chop him up?
Name: Blob 14th October 2009
i think its nice he gave the money 2 the poor
Name: Jordana Victoria Daniella 15th October 2009
i don't really like it because it was nice to give the coins to the poor but to ask Athna to chop him up was'nt very nice
Name: Molly 18th October 2009
i love this story and i like the idea that he gives the coins to the poor but i don't get why he ask her to kill her.
Name: Britany 20th October 2009
A good start but you might need to look over again! A very good story
Name: Tilly 26th October 2009
well that is very good but was he sad or happy it dosent sayon the writing?
Name: Darren 4th November 2009
great story,they end was cool about giving everyone common sense,good imagination.
Name: Pleakly1 5th November 2009
Really good idea mate. I like the bit about everbody having common sense. But i think some people don't have and common sense at all
Name: Natasha 5th November 2009
why is his name common sense.
Name: Brain Boxxxgirlllll 8th November 2009
i agreee wiv morgan good but 2 short****
Name: Chantelle 10th November 2009
i really like your story it is funny and i cant stop reading it my liltle sister loves it ..... hint make it a bit longer
Name: Megan 15th November 2009
I liked it but not the wishes
Name: Dylan 20th November 2009
it was great and make a'n other one and tell me how toooooooooooooooo doooooooooooooooooooooooooo one another time and do a'n other one








Name: Bethant Thompson 22nd November 2009
i loved that story i cant belive you came up with it!
im gonna tell it too all my family and see what they think!
Name: Bethany Thompson 22nd November 2009
i know i have already commented but that story was sooo intresting i want to comment on it more and more.
here are your achievements:
intresting (well done did that one)
well set out (well done did that one)
a long story(not very long but it means something)
means something (well done did that one i liked it very much)
WELL DONE YOU DID VERY WELL ON THIS STORY AND I WOULD LIKE TO SAY HOW MUCH COMON SENSE YOU HAVE IN YOU MAYBE ATHENA PUT FAR TOO MANY PIECES OF COMMEN SENSE IN YOU!
I REALLY LIKED THE PART WHERE YOU PUT THE BITAT THE END THE 3 WISHES PART THAT WAS GREAT AND I STLL CANT BELIVE YOU WROTE THAT I REALLY LIKED THIS STORY IT WAS GR8
WELL DONE
FROM
BETHANY THOMPSON
XXX

PS: WELL DONE
PPS: PLZ WRITE ANTHOR STORY YOU WOULD MAKE A GOOD AUTHOR!
LOL
Name: Jessica Bell 24th November 2009
i fought it was a good story
Name: Ethan 27th November 2009
I liked how your story ends. Very creative!
Name: Kiara 28th November 2009
it's great you could live a life of fantastic story making DO ANOTHER ONE rock on dude!
Name: Nicon 29th November 2009
an intresting story. liked the words. loved the story!
Name: Naomi 29th November 2009
i guess that would be a nice thing to do.lol.eugh!
Name: Maddi 30th November 2009
I thought it was a great story, 5/5!
Name: Sara 7th January 2010
It was toooooo short but it was good
Name: ? 19th January 2010
That was gr8 story make more so i can read them all
Name: Tani 24th March 2010
what a great story idea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Name: Megan 15th May 2010
it is really awesome but who would be called common sence
Name: Ewan,courtney,sharn-a,teagan 5th December 2012
Its a nice idea, needs a little bit more deatail about comen senta
Name: Vivian, Grade Six 17th September 2013
Hey, I really liked the story idea, but I think you should add some more descriptions and details. I liked that you have used your knowledge about the Greek God.I wonder How old you are?
Name: Godwin 20th October 2013
Nice

 

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