| Name: Sophie |
20th January 2009 |
| this story is soooo the best ever in the world yes it is welldone and i give as a prize a comment saying you are the best in the world yes you are.
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| Name: XEllax |
20th January 2009 |
| Hi your story is soooooo cool !
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| Name: XEllax |
20th January 2009 |
| I know i have already commented but this is to my freind sophie (Hi)
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| Name: Harry |
20th January 2009 |
| your story makes alot of sense
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| Name: Newzealander |
28th July 2009 |
| what a short story but fantastic its so little but hey it is meaningful it makes a headstart for me at school cause our topic is myths and legends and this gives me an idea cause im not that good cause im only 11 my rating 5
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| Name: Tiara Kunder |
21st August 2009 |
| It Was Great Justine I Would Like To Write A Story Like You.
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| Name: Alyra |
21st August 2009 |
| Justine I Loved Your Story It Was Sooooo Nice I Can't Tell You.***************
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| Name: Oog Oog |
5th September 2009 |
| it it short and str8 to the point gr8
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| Name: Chopstick |
25th September 2009 |
| i cried (NOT) i liked the storey but it was 2 short!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Name: Jordan |
28th September 2009 |
| look it made alot of common sence. XD
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| Name: Ellie |
1st October 2009 |
| it was a little bit shot but it was a good story
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| Name: Ellie |
1st October 2009 |
| this sory was so great i loved it.
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| Name: Catherine |
4th October 2009 |
| I liked this story but I would have liked it more interesting (no offence)
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| Name: Amanda |
5th October 2009 |
| good story, really enjoyed it!!!
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| Name: Morgan |
6th October 2009 |
I liked this story but I don't understand why chopping yourself up would give other people common sense.
If he had common sense himself he wouldn't of chopped himself up!
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| Name: Olivia |
10th October 2009 |
| It was good,but I don't get why he asked Athena to chop him up?
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| Name: Blob |
14th October 2009 |
| i think its nice he gave the money 2 the poor
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| Name: Jordana Victoria Daniella |
15th October 2009 |
| i don't really like it because it was nice to give the coins to the poor but to ask Athna to chop him up was'nt very nice
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| Name: Molly |
18th October 2009 |
| i love this story and i like the idea that he gives the coins to the poor but i don't get why he ask her to kill her.
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| Name: Britany |
20th October 2009 |
| A good start but you might need to look over again! A very good story
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| Name: Tilly |
26th October 2009 |
| well that is very good but was he sad or happy it dosent sayon the writing?
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| Name: Darren |
4th November 2009 |
| great story,they end was cool about giving everyone common sense,good imagination.
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| Name: Pleakly1 |
5th November 2009 |
| Really good idea mate. I like the bit about everbody having common sense. But i think some people don't have and common sense at all
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| Name: Chantelle |
10th November 2009 |
| i really like your story it is funny and i cant stop reading it my liltle sister loves it ..... hint make it a bit longer
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| Name: Megan |
15th November 2009 |
I liked it but not the wishes
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| Name: Dylan |
20th November 2009 |
it was great and make a'n other one and tell me how toooooooooooooooo doooooooooooooooooooooooooo one another time and do a'n other one
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| Name: Bethant Thompson |
22nd November 2009 |
i loved that story i cant belive you came up with it!
im gonna tell it too all my family and see what they think!
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| Name: Bethany Thompson |
22nd November 2009 |
i know i have already commented but that story was sooo intresting i want to comment on it more and more.
here are your achievements:
intresting (well done did that one)
well set out (well done did that one)
a long story(not very long but it means something)
means something (well done did that one i liked it very much)
WELL DONE YOU DID VERY WELL ON THIS STORY AND I WOULD LIKE TO SAY HOW MUCH COMON SENSE YOU HAVE IN YOU MAYBE ATHENA PUT FAR TOO MANY PIECES OF COMMEN SENSE IN YOU!
I REALLY LIKED THE PART WHERE YOU PUT THE BITAT THE END THE 3 WISHES PART THAT WAS GREAT AND I STLL CANT BELIVE YOU WROTE THAT I REALLY LIKED THIS STORY IT WAS GR8
WELL DONE
FROM
BETHANY THOMPSON
XXX
PS: WELL DONE
PPS: PLZ WRITE ANTHOR STORY YOU WOULD MAKE A GOOD AUTHOR!
LOL
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| Name: Ethan |
27th November 2009 |
| I liked how your story ends. Very creative!
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| Name: Kiara |
28th November 2009 |
| it's great you could live a life of fantastic story making DO ANOTHER ONE rock on dude!
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| Name: Nicon |
29th November 2009 |
an intresting story. liked the words. loved the story!
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| Name: Naomi |
29th November 2009 |
| i guess that would be a nice thing to do.lol.eugh!
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| Name: Maddi |
30th November 2009 |
| I thought it was a great story, 5/5!
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| Name: Sara |
7th January 2010 |
| It was toooooo short but it was good
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| Name: ? |
19th January 2010 |
| That was gr8 story make more so i can read them all
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| Name: Tani |
24th March 2010 |
| what a great story idea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Name: Megan |
15th May 2010 |
| it is really awesome but who would be called common sence
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