| Name: Jojo |
23rd March 2007 |
| This story is so beautiful, it really touched my heart.I can't believe a 9-year-old girl did this!!!!!!!!
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| Name: Elyshia |
1st May 2007 |
| Wow that is amazing. I went on the site to look for ideas for homework and then I read that. I was amazed. Well done!!!!
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| Name: Josephine Marinog |
27th June 2007 |
| Wow!!!!!!!!!!this story was very good story for the children that had problem with thier self...its realt touch my heart............
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| Name: Lucy |
3rd February 2009 |
such a touching story.
the picture is nice too!
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| Name: ? |
5th March 2009 |
| Great job on that story! I have to do a project at school where we have to wirte a butterfly myth.
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| Name: Rafaella |
23rd April 2009 |
| this story is pretty short add some more to make it more intresting and more touching.
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| Name: Elizabeth An Marsh |
3rd May 2009 |
| I loved your story, it was amazing u have used lots of adjectives you tried very hard. from elizabeth ann marsh.
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| Name: Lucy Heald |
30th September 2009 |
| great make more & i will read evry single one
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| Name: LUCY HEALD |
4th October 2009 |
SORRY I CAN NOT STAY AWAY FROM THIS
STORRY ITS
REALY GOOD
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| Name: Yasmin |
16th January 2010 |
| i just made a story but they have not put it on how do you do it and i have never heard that story about how the butterfly get's it's butiful wings
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| Name: Eden |
17th February 2010 |
| Really exciting!!! I can't get away from this story!!Ten out of ten!!!!
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| Name: Grezzell |
31st August 2010 |
| it was so beautiful story I had never read before. so enjoy the story.
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| Name: FizaNoor |
1st October 2010 |
| I loved this story.I just can't stop looking at this story.It was so good.But you could have written more. Thanks FizaNoor
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| Name: Sadhvika |
9th June 2012 |
| It was a remarkable story, but i daresay you could have used a bit more descriptive language... if u no wat i mean!
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| Name: NAEMAN |
13th January 2013 |
I GAVE THE STORY A 4 out of 5 it was fantastic!
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| Name: Emely |
30th January 2013 |
| I loved it. It is worth a 5.
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| Name: Kimie |
24th February 2013 |
| Nice story...imma use it for it for my English...
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