| Name: Dd |
2nd November 2009 |
| i think it is alright but half of it dose not make sense.
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| Name: Missy |
21st September 2010 |
| I think this was a good fable, but the one I have read about how snake has no legs was different.
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| Name: Andrew |
12th November 2010 |
| real reason is because of satan. satan tricked eve to eat the fruit of the tree of knowledge of good and evil, and satan was a serpent in disguise, so god punished him by forcing him to crawl on the ground all its life.
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| Name: Sian |
29th January 2011 |
I't was diffrent to what ive heard about, mine is about snake traded his legs for some eyes.
But it was intresting for a long story like that.
I would never be able to do a story like that you are very brave from doing that.
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| Name: Lola |
20th July 2011 |
| lol i am doing a progect on snakes
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| Name: Sarah.h |
17th December 2011 |
| Most ever, interesting I've ever heard from somebody talented like you!!!
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| Name: Belle |
13th January 2012 |
| lol it is so interesting i'll read it to my future grandchildren...
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| Name: Nina |
7th February 2012 |
| cool story i need to write on for school have any ideas?
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| Name: Sandra |
8th March 2012 |
| cool that why snake never nice to you because of that!
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| Name: Danil |
25th July 2012 |
| I thought god took. Them away
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| Name: Justin |
16th August 2012 |
| This story is so interesting and funny!
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| Name: Troy |
10th September 2012 |
| im using this story for my project lol...not pleadurisig...since some people care about that
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| Name: Isha |
16th April 2013 |
| nise story using it for my myth
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| Name: Abby |
10th May 2013 |
| I really like this book. I could read it all day because its so fabulious. I would give it a 10/10 if i could. I love it.
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| Name: Raya |
4th June 2013 |
omgsh seiousouly thats what the snake gets but is really good
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| Name: Someone |
11th June 2013 |
| it was very shoort and didn\'t make sense if the snake got his leggs torn off how would he be ale to move and the amount of bood that the snake lost would have killed him, and the he couldn\'t repopulate.
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| Name: Abombabay |
22nd August 2013 |
This is a good story but make it a bit longer next time :)
Well done!
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| Name: Miracle |
20th September 2013 |
wow,so interesting...i didn't know why snakes didn't have legs,but now i know.. well done..:)
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| Name: Nunya |
22nd October 2013 |
| The story was awesome but did not make sense.
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| Name: Curtis |
29th November 2013 |
| you had some spelling misstakes and i didnt like it
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