| Name: Dd |
2nd November 2009 |
| i think it is alright but half of it dose not make sense.
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| Name: Missy |
21st September 2010 |
| I think this was a good fable, but the one I have read about how snake has no legs was different.
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| Name: Andrew |
12th November 2010 |
| real reason is because of satan. satan tricked eve to eat the fruit of the tree of knowledge of good and evil, and satan was a serpent in disguise, so god punished him by forcing him to crawl on the ground all its life.
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| Name: Sian |
29th January 2011 |
I't was diffrent to what ive heard about, mine is about snake traded his legs for some eyes.
But it was intresting for a long story like that.
I would never be able to do a story like that you are very brave from doing that.
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| Name: Lola |
20th July 2011 |
| lol i am doing a progect on snakes
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| Name: Sarah.h |
17th December 2011 |
| Most ever, interesting I've ever heard from somebody talented like you!!!
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| Name: Belle |
13th January 2012 |
| lol it is so interesting i'll read it to my future grandchildren...
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| Name: Nina |
7th February 2012 |
| cool story i need to write on for school have any ideas?
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| Name: Sandra |
8th March 2012 |
| cool that why snake never nice to you because of that!
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| Name: Danil |
25th July 2012 |
| I thought god took. Them away
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| Name: Justin |
16th August 2012 |
| This story is so interesting and funny!
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| Name: Troy |
10th September 2012 |
| im using this story for my project lol...not pleadurisig...since some people care about that
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| Name: Isha |
16th April 2013 |
| nise story using it for my myth
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| Name: Abby |
10th May 2013 |
| I really like this book. I could read it all day because its so fabulious. I would give it a 10/10 if i could. I love it.
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| Name: Raya |
4th June 2013 |
omgsh seiousouly thats what the snake gets but is really good
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| Name: Someone |
11th June 2013 |
| it was very shoort and didn\'t make sense if the snake got his leggs torn off how would he be ale to move and the amount of bood that the snake lost would have killed him, and the he couldn\'t repopulate.
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| Name: Abombabay |
22nd August 2013 |
This is a good story but make it a bit longer next time :)
Well done!
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| Name: Miracle |
20th September 2013 |
wow,so interesting...i didn't know why snakes didn't have legs,but now i know.. well done..:)
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| Name: Nunya |
22nd October 2013 |
| The story was awesome but did not make sense.
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| Name: Curtis |
29th November 2013 |
| you had some spelling misstakes and i didnt like it
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| Name: Gilbert |
26th June 2014 |
| Haha ha!!! So who told u b coz at that time were no people at the earth?
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| Name: Dandelion |
8th September 2014 |
| hi.that is very interesting story about snakes.its so useful for me.thanks
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| Name: Ellen |
9th September 2014 |
| Fix your spelling, but otherwise great!
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| Name: Julian |
28th September 2014 |
| Even tho this myth isnt true. But snakes really dont have legs because long ago when god made earth,satan got into the snake and the snake let him so therefore god said to the snake, "you will walk the earth slithering on your belly for the rest of your days here on earth".
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| Name: AWESOME |
8th October 2014 |
| this is awesome but.. i want a true fact
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| Name: Jasmine |
12th January 2015 |
| I like it because it is creative, thank you Ellen
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| Name: Manal |
18th March 2015 |
| It is great but i want a true fact because im reaserching on it every day
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| Name: Skydoesmine100 |
20th March 2015 |
| It is true fact... I don't think so but I like that story not bad..
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| Name: Sfunukwazi |
6th July 2015 |
| No no i don\'t believe it this one is like Lamarckism idea
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| Name: Pooja Kori |
23rd August 2015 |
its nice funny ........
but i dont no its true or false
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| Name: Lauren |
9th September 2015 |
| I think this story is very interesting and has helpful facts
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| Name: STEVEN |
28th September 2015 |
| It\'s interesting and keeps boredom away
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| Name: Josh |
2nd December 2015 |
| I can confirm this is biblically correct.
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| Name: Issac |
7th March 2016 |
| that\'s not how it works god made every animal and god just wanted snakes to not have feet and back then in Adam and eve and the devil trued him self into a snake and snakes never had legs because of god
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| Name: BOB |
4th April 2016 |
| in the last 3 lines , it says wheen instead of when
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| Name: Paras |
30th May 2016 |
| Very interesting,logical for kids
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| Name: John.patterson |
15th August 2016 |
| It was a great story but there was a lot of spelling errors that set me back a little. Overall, it was a good story.
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| Name: Joshika |
25th October 2016 |
| it is a really really a great story.
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| Name: Jeff |
13th January 2017 |
| i copied it for school and got 100
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| Name: Savanna |
4th May 2017 |
| It\'s a great story I copied it for school and got a 100😜😀
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| Name: Dhiya |
14th June 2017 |
| Cute used it for my homework
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