| Name: Daniel |
14th December 2009 |
| IT IS NOT A WINTER STORY.Anyway it is a nice story
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| Name: Jacob |
17th December 2009 |
| That was almost the best story I have ever read!
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| Name: Ayisha |
23rd December 2009 |
| i really enjoyed the story,but it was quiet funny but very nice and good to read
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| Name: Lauren |
7th January 2010 |
| I think your story sounds like an adult wrote it - it is so good! You are a good author
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| Name: Chloe |
7th January 2010 |
| I realy liked the story and the storyline was good but daniels right it isn't a winter story but my friends would love it and I am sure you will get lots of good comment and i didnt like the part when they were all tugging at his neck because it could of hurt him alot and I am not comfortbale with that
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| Name: Daisy |
12th January 2010 |
| wow what a wonderful story is it a legend huh.
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| Name: Amtul |
13th January 2010 |
| amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing story i just thought the part were the pulled his neck was a little wierd:)
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| Name: Poppy |
13th January 2010 |
| i like the story but chloe is right it must of hurt the tim and are you an adult or did you get some help and my sis likes it
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| Name: Georgia |
15th January 2010 |
| This is a really good story. I liked the bit when Alvin hid the ball up the tree and Tim got his neck stuck. That could be a popular story!
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| Name: Zoha |
24th March 2010 |
i liked the story but Chloe is right the part were they were tugging his neck it would really
hurt:( but a good story
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| Name: Alina |
27th August 2012 |
Lol!!
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very funny and fantastic story I have ever heard!!!
:)
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| Name: Brittney Mason |
9th September 2012 |
| ummm i need to know how why the nec of a girafe is so much longer then the humans
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| Name: Victor |
13th September 2012 |
| this is one of my best stories i have ever heard. I\'m very grateful. Thank u very much. Awesome
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| Name: Millie |
10th October 2012 |
i love this story it encourages people my age 10 years old and maybe above to write stories like this i love this story because it is very funny and awsome so i do wonder how did the baboon get a red bottom hope that could be another story awsome keep writing them plz
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| Name: Nikita |
16th December 2012 |
| just the story i need thank you
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| Name: Bob |
15th January 2013 |
| Wow... that was awesome!
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| Name: Jade |
10th March 2013 |
| thank you your story was a realy good idea it really helped my write a story for my recption buddy!!!!!
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