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| Name: GRAMMY |
22nd December 2009 |
| Great story! I am so pround of you. Keep up the good work. Love You!
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| Name: Grandma |
25th December 2009 |
| Way to Go abbey !!!!!! PaPa and I are super proud of you. Keep up the good work!!
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| Name: MaryAnne Simon |
25th December 2009 |
| Abbey, what an awesome job you did telling this story! It is really interesting. Grammy and Grandpa's friend, Mrs. Simon
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| Name: Paula Hayes-Atlanta |
25th December 2009 |
Abigail,
I just read your story to our entire family and we all loved it! Keep on writing. We hope to go to your book signing one day!
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| Name: Love |
29th January 2010 |
| very nice story please publish more
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| Name: Daisy |
30th January 2010 |
it was really good and quick abi,
well done for winning!
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| Name: Rose |
31st January 2010 |
| it is a brilant story
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| Name: Bethany |
2nd February 2010 |
| I think this story is astonishing and I hope you publish lots more fun exciting storys.
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| Name: Georgina Wilson |
2nd February 2010 |
| It's ok but your spelling is messed up and some of it don't make sence. so just try a little harder next time and make sure you cheak your spellings.
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| Name: Barwaqo |
2nd February 2010 |
| I think it was great you did really well you deserve to win publish some more.
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| Name: Class 3m |
4th February 2010 |
| We think it was really good. You could put in even more description of the house and the zoo. We thought the ending was funny.
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| Name: Pop Tart |
8th February 2011 |
| i love it its great.... its funny and i love the fact that there is a monkey in it because i love monkeys
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| Name: LAL |
8th February 2011 |
| You need to add more
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| Name: Elle Belle |
22nd December 2011 |
| Very creative, Abi. Check how you use the dialogue, though.
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| Name: Aishah |
2nd December 2012 |
| i hope that monkey don't come to my house
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