| Name: Zk |
13th March 2010 |
| i love this story it was fab and i rate it 100 out of a 100 ........... totally great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so well done KHAN
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| Name: Dath Maul |
13th March 2010 |
i just like your style of writing and academic words and sentences..i think that this story was the best out of all the story's and should be on the showcase.yes this story had everything and is a story to be on the showcase
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| Name: Faisal |
14th March 2010 |
simply best idea and heart touching,Miss khan your thought are cute and mature at the same time.
well done .....great job
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| Name: Chloe |
14th March 2010 |
yes i agree dath maul that this story had
everything and i think should be on the Showcase !!!!!! yes and this story had difficult words and got me interested and guess what i learned new words to %%%%%%%
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| Name: Chloe |
15th March 2010 |
| it was fab story and i loved it
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| Name: Abdullah |
15th March 2010 |
| it was good but you could improve it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Name: Abdullah |
16th March 2010 |
| yes i give t 100 out of 100 .fabulous story and i want this story to be on the showcase so great story KHAN
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| Name: Zoha |
17th March 2010 |
| lovely story and i love the last line..
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| Name: Khan |
18th March 2010 |
| i love my story because when i feel i not good at anything i remember this story and whisper IT IS GOOD TO BE ME. You can try it tooo.And thank you guys for commenting on my story.!!!!!
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| Name: Tani |
18th March 2010 |
it was a stupendous story. That's getting 5 stars and going in the showcase for sure
so well done
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| Name: Paige |
23rd March 2010 |
| this is a great Aesop's fable and i think that it deserve to be on the Showcase .so well done!!!!!!
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| Name: Elise |
24th March 2010 |
| i think that this story is very interesting and i like it a lot ...i also think that this book should be published!!
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| Name: Ovary |
24th March 2010 |
| i love the story and the picture is extra good and great vocabulary khan!!!!!!
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| Name: Lauren |
26th March 2010 |
| A very nice story but I have one question is it a myth or legend
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| Name: Victoria |
29th March 2010 |
| Thanks for the commnt on my story JACK FROST, this story is short but I really enjoyed it. Great job.
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| Name: Khan |
29th March 2010 |
| it is a legend Lauren and i am glad you like the picture Charlotte.thanks bob for saying my story is good!!!!
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| Name: Tina |
30th March 2010 |
| Thats a cool twist to the book writen. I like the vocab you used, it made the story more interesting. I dont think this is really a myth or a legend, just a story..
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| Name: Kelsey |
2nd April 2010 |
| i loved that story i would of never thought of a story that good!!!
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| Name: Ayesha Perera |
3rd April 2010 |
| Awesome!! I like the words you used I had to use the dictionary for them. And I liked the moroal to this story its good to be you! Anyway awesome!!!
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| Name: Mikaela.h |
4th April 2010 |
| So cool that realy makes you feel good afterv lisening 2 the other spooky stories.
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| Name: Charlotte |
25th April 2010 |
| this story was good and helped me with my homwork
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| Name: Jennifer |
10th May 2010 |
| Thanks for the story, i really needed to learn a myth and you gave us 1 thanks!
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| Name: Becky Cooper |
11th May 2010 |
| I Like this website very Much, It Gives Me Lots To Learn ABOUT, with Some Nice Pictues to Look At. There R Lots Of Interesting Pages to go On to Aswell.
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| Name: Sara |
22nd May 2010 |
| i just love it and cool carecters
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| Name: Courtney Shaw |
23rd May 2010 |
| hi im lovin the website me and my sister are chillin watching and makin myths and legends
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| Name: Khan |
1st June 2010 |
| thanks guys for all your nice comments.
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| Name: Khan |
6th June 2010 |
| thank you guys for liking my story
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| Name: Ciara |
16th June 2010 |
i like it 2!
it is great
xxx
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| Name: Fern |
18th June 2010 |
| I think you could have given it more detail, instead of just making it like and 5 second story.If you added more detail it would really help.
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| Name: ELLS |
19th June 2010 |
| LOVELY STORY VERY CLEVER
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| Name: Louise |
19th June 2010 |
| I love this story it kinda reminds me of a story that i know and i loved it 10000000000000000000000000/5
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| Name: Ellie |
20th June 2010 |
| your stry is better than my story, where do you get it from.
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| Name: Seyifunmi |
1st July 2010 |
I love this story where did you get it from it was the best story in the world.
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| Name: Hannah |
9th July 2010 |
i love your story but where did u get it from did u make it up or is it real
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| Name: Sarah |
10th July 2010 |
| i really like this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Name: Loren |
13th July 2010 |
I think it was really good because lacie
is really happy and at the end she was
glad to be her self because i think she wanted to be some one else.
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| Name: "The Unknown" |
8th January 2011 |
| well I see that you have remixed the story of the mouse and the little show-offy lion into a small,understanding story.It was fasnating seeing the story a little changed for once!
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