I lOve this story I wana be part of it and it's a bit like the little mermaid I love mermaids and sea creachers I am a big fan of mermaids and all of this story makes pirfectly good sence
A wonderful story. I liked it but I was thinking that you should have increased it. Like writing something that will bring the price and the mermaid back together and the sea witch will know her worth. Above all I liked it and it was of my taste.