| Name: Broolke |
17th December 2010 |
| it is ok but u cuold add some more on
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| Name: Mia |
17th December 2010 |
| very interesting and good detail,if i were a teacher i'd give it two stars! :)
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| Name: Eloise |
6th January 2011 |
You have done a great job.
Well done.
:-)
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| Name: Ribena! |
8th January 2011 |
| i think you could be a very sucsessful story teller! i was completely enthralled by your story and you had good use of ajditives, smilies, adverbs!! well done! itheres just 1 thing i noticed, if the creatures smelling was so strong then why didn't he tear his nose off before when he was living in the dingy lair and killing all the girls so he would have smelt the blood and the mud already. i really liked it up until there.
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| Name: Joshua |
20th January 2011 |
hello im new
this story is incredibele myths and legand is the beat
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| Name: Charlotte |
21st January 2011 |
i love it! it is a bit gory but cool!!!
its a reall good thing to watch beacuse its fun and cool to watch!!!!! :) :)
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| Name: Charlotte |
21st January 2011 |
hi im new this site is cool i love it its is sooo exiting i liked it until the bit when someone died.....but it was still exiting.
i liked the pictures you used and the words!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
from charlotte
XXXXX :)
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| Name: Storm |
22nd January 2011 |
| I really like this story its quite gory but very well written.
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| Name: Hannah |
31st January 2011 |
| why is it not letin me and my bff to lisin to itxxx
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| Name: Tegan |
1st February 2011 |
| i love it. it is a bit scary but i like scary things i love them me and my family could lisen to scary thins all night and day they are so fun to read
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| Name: Chloe |
2nd February 2011 |
| I love the story i like scary things
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| Name: Georgina |
4th February 2011 |
i really liked this epic story!!!
is there any more like this?
lol
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| Name: Farah |
8th February 2011 |
| This is really cool , hope there are more stories about this.
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| Name: Baby G |
10th February 2011 |
| this story is absoloutly AMAZING! how did you write so much?
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| Name: Jainey |
11th February 2011 |
| wow your story was so awesome the half snake half crow was a bit weird but it was still brilliant :D
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| Name: Jennifer |
13th February 2011 |
| I am new too and i agree with joshua
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| Name: Andrea |
15th February 2011 |
| this is a cool story it has a ending that is super funny!!! :)
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| Name: Aishah Khursheed |
16th February 2011 |
good story, good effort, and a very nice story i write this story
thank you Katherine for your wonderful story.
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| Name: Anonomus |
19th February 2011 |
| it was ok but put a bit more exitment and more grusomeness plz thanx
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| Name: Harley |
16th March 2011 |
| I love greece & the capital of greece is athens, i like greek gods & Zeuz is the king of gods & Hera is the queen of the gods
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| Name: Aishah Khurhseed |
24th March 2011 |
| I just LOVE thsi story its so awesome and really interestign story, really love it :)
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| Name: Indigo Base |
29th March 2011 |
| We really enjoyed your story because we liked all the adjectives at the beginning of the story. They helped us imagine a frightening setting and we wanted to read on.
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| Name: Maria |
13th April 2011 |
| im new to this website and your story is absulutelly exelent hhow could u write all tht and how long did it take to write.
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| Name: Mica |
20th August 2011 |
| hi that story was apsalootly amazing i rated it 5 out of 5
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| Name: Kate |
31st August 2011 |
| I love that story! Please write some more!
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| Name: Olivia |
13th September 2011 |
| Really good story like it wright some more
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| Name: Alice |
17th September 2011 |
| That was a great story i keep on reading it again and again!
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| Name: Matthew |
21st September 2011 |
I really enjoyed this story. The author should publish it and earn money by it.One of the best myths/legends I have ever read 10 out of 10.
Matthew
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| Name: Seleena |
7th October 2011 |
| it was a bit boring but good story
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| Name: James And Julia |
8th October 2011 |
| The story was fine but we also wanted it to have more because we love storys but not this much with yours( well we are telling the truth). We think if you put more similes then it will be the bestest story we have ever read. If you do then I will love it and you will be a superstar. That meens I will give you 10/10 ok but for the moment Its 8/10. The better the story the more people will coment you great coments, Including us(we are brother and sister you know and I have no sister) That is all we have to say. (remember 10/10).
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