| Name: Maisie |
18th January 2008 |
i have red this story be-for and this wasn't the best version though for a young gitrl ot is very very good!
keep working
xxxMAISIExxx
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| Name: Katie |
6th February 2008 |
| I liked the story but it was a bit hard to read as im only 9 years of age the story was good as it was like the old one. It could be better as i said it WAS A BIT HARD TO READ so next time make it easy for little ones to read.
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| Name: Sam |
6th February 2008 |
the story was good but me at the age of 12 could have done better i could read it and understand it very well as i said im am 12 i dont know how old you are how nows you could be 13 the story is good and well writen so good luck if you write another story. from
xxsam pinegoldxx
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| Name: Aisyah |
15th April 2008 |
| I think that this story is very discriptive and I would absolutely recommend it for a childrens favourite myths and legends.
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| Name: Bob |
10th November 2009 |
i thought it was very good
well done!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Name: Natasha |
14th January 2010 |
| i thought your story was the best story out all the storys about the minatour that i have heard so far
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| Name: Rebecca |
14th January 2010 |
| i thought your story was very good because it was an unusual story because of the stone
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| Name: Kai Hailstone |
1st June 2010 |
I am a very bad drawer and I realy wish you could help me in person becuase
we do alot of drawings in school and Ireally want to get better at drawing.
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| Name: Lamar |
2nd November 2010 |
| I thought it was the best story in the world
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| Name: Me |
15th February 2011 |
| i dont like this story there are a lot of "and then this happened" "and then he did" and all that stuff
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| Name: Kaylee |
27th March 2011 |
| i think this story is the best story ive ever heard.
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| Name: (name Not Given) |
28th August 2011 |
| The actual story is absolutely different. I should know, I'm studying it at school.
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