Halloween night a legend comes and takes all the children to a attic in death valley, California.
Legend has it that the Gobbler still is alive to this day. The way he is attracted is by children who steal others candy, egg someones house, and scare 100 people in one night!
The night of October 31,1985 the Gobbler came to take twice as many children from Portland, Oregon! Those kids never got found, but if you go down to Death Valley, California you will see over 500 skeletons on young kids. If you go down to Death Valley, go at night because its so hot there that you would die in seconds.
Beware of the Gobbler or he will be sure to take you Halloween night!
nice story, though it could use a little bit more details, it was awesome! i myself wish to be a writer and i think that you have the potential to be a writer yourself! just make sure you add pleanty of details to the story so that the readers can get a better picture of what is going on in the story. great job though! :)
18th October 2012
This is a bit scary.I think i'll have nightmares tonight.