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The Vampires

A myth submitted to the site by Hussain

Brevick, Norway

Vampires. We all know Vampires. With their sharp teeth which they use to bite the necks of ordinary people and suck their red juicy blood.


Miss Battleaxe had started to act strangley since the full moon on October the 31st. Miss Battleaxe was a woman who lived on 13 GraveYard Street. But she hid an extraordinary secret. She was the leader of all the vampires of the world. Every 4 years,in a leap year she gathered all the vampires of England into the Doggie Hotel on Friday 13th. Even when the date was not Friday 13th, for example Saturday 13th they would hold the meeting on the Friday before it.

Soon myself travelled to the Doggie Hotel when i found out that the vampires were there. It was Friday 12th and for my birthday my grandma gave me 2 rats called Mike and Milly. They were great. But soon the manager of the hotel, Mr Transfulasania found out about this. There was a big scene."You dog,why are you not letting my kid keep his rats,you dog?!"
"Madam please don't be angry,i will let your son keep them here." "Thank you,rat."

I went into the chior room to teach my pets some tricks. Just then a group of men and ladies came in.I quickly hid. A lady stepped up onto the stage.
"We have a mission. A mission to eliminate all 13 year old girls. We will do that by biting their necks until they scream in agony. To do this we will make a 13 year old girls only party. Then when they come we will knock them out before the biting."

I was trapped because the door was locked and there was no other way out.I made a run for it and when i jumped i was turned into a mouse.I quickly ran away. Soon the party started and 13 year old girls came. But then a horrid gas came and then knocked them all out. As i recall, they were never seen again but on Friday 13th they come back...
P.S this is a diary and i now live with my grandma as a mouse.

By Hussain
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Name: Jacki 23rd February 2013
Uh...It was not a good story. It did NOT make any sense. Every thing was all mixed up. Why 13 year old girls? You never wrote why...
Name: Bad Story 9th January 2013
this story is just like wiches they get turned into mouses and get tricked and the boy has two pet mouses you are telling the wiches story in a vampie version.
Name: Nicole 27th November 2012
Isn't this a bit like the story of 'The Witches'?
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