There once lived a mother and father called the Dylans. They had a daughter and son. The daughter was called Sofia and the son was called Salvi. Everyday Salvi and Sofia would go into their garden where they play where there is a pond. Oh no! Its a pond with a water mummies curse and every time she hears someone doing something wrong she gets the person by the neck and drags her into the water mummies home, and makes a potion on you which makes you her slave. She makes you becoming her slave by hpnotysing you with the potion. She lives in this cave with lots of rooms with picture of her friends on the wall who is a ghost .
One day the Dylans were going out shopping to buy some milk and water. Suddenly she slipped an water came out. But the mummy came out and got Sofia on the leg because she started running already but she had to wait for the car to go. The mummy got her and dragged her until she was with the mummy.
Then Salvi had an idea. He whispered to his parents and they all aggreed and that evening he used some water and out came the mummy. Then he said " you can have me after I go the toilet." The mummy said "okay" but Salvi didn't go to the toilet he tied a rope onto his belly so when he is in the mummies home he can find the way out and back home. Then the mummy grabbed Salvi on the neck an dragged him along .
When the mummy wasn't looking. He went to find his sister when she was giving the mummy her grapes. He took hold of Sofia's hand and dragged . He brought her home and went to the doctors immedeatly to stop the hypnoyising. The doctor gave her a tablet and she was back to normal. Then they all lived happily ever after. by Aksan
Miss Lally's class