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The Girl Who Didn't Survive

A myth submitted to the site by Amy Layland


Every sunday night at 7:30 in Alway village, a strange noise (a loud banging noise) at exactly 7:30. But know one knew what it was it went on for days, weeks and now it had gotten to be a month! But also herd about 8:00 was a deafing scream, therefore everyone was to scared to check out what it was.

A woman was new to town and she was in the room at the back of her house, she looked out of the window and saw a vast cave which loomed over the city and hadnt been noticed! The woman was the closest to the cave and herd the scremes every night but she didn't know what it was? The woman didnt speak to anyone in the villiage nither did her little girl. Because of this most people thought they were strange.

That windy night there were no bangs and no screams. Even though it might be nice to get some sleep, the silence in the villiage was keeping everyone awake in fright!

The little girl could not take it anymore, so she jumped out of her bed, put her coat and shoes on and ran to the cave.

when she saw what was infront of her it was not what she was expecting, she saw, blood stained walls which said DIE on the side of the cave, she smellt a horrid stench which wafted up her tiny, cold nose. However that didnt stop her from going inside.

When she got there it was pitch black and a rumbling noise came from above! But what was it she thought to herself? suddenly, a big thing jumped down that banged on the floor,to her it looked like a man croosed with a spider and bull ?? Before she could say a word the big monster took out one of his claws and ripped it down her spine leaving her with excrusheating pain! As she screamed her mother had noticed she had gone but it was to late, the girl had been ripped apart and threw partly out of the cave and was found the next day.

who would it be next? what would they do about it? who would stop the horrid beast?!

By Amy Layland
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Name: Amber 7th May 2009
I think this story is really good and really scary, Great job Amy Layland
Name: Anupreet 24th April 2009
i like it very much.i loved it when she died, and how you described her being in pain. What is the girls name?
Name: Sahba 4th April 2009
You got quite a lot of spellings wrong and punctuation is needed.Great story.
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