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Evil Batt

A myth submitted to the site by Bethany Storey

Yiewsley, Hillingdon, UK

Waterone and I was at the falling rocks. We felt quite scared because we might fall down. Suddenly Waterone and I fell down a hill into falling forest! I smelt that dirty mud. We couldn’t see anything because it was dark.

I heard something so Waterone grabbed me and flew out. Just then we heard something creep up on us! Its name was Evil Bat. He was very very petrifying. Its power was if you looked into its eyes it can kill you!

Waterone and I got out of the falling forest. We saw some hills. When we slept on the hills they turned into mountains! It was evil bat. Waterone slipped down the mountains then I slipped. Waterone jumped then I jumped! We were nearly at the screaming cliffs but Evilbat was there.

They had to get the kings wand, but they flew over him and got to the screaming cliffs. We saw Evilbat again he was just staring at us. We flew and jumped on his head quickly and suddenly his neck snapped! Then we ran and got the King’s wand. Then they went to tell everyone they got the King’s wand back and they all celebrated by a big feast.

By Bethany Storey
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Latest comments:
Name: Lucy Sun 28th December 2012
well i think this is a simple but funny story well done x
Name: Darren Storey 28th December 2012
i love the part when evil bat necks snaps because that is what everyone wants to do to a evil bad............. brilliant story though
Name: Miranda Rainbow 25th April 2009
i think this story didn't make very much sense because one minute she was saying `we` and the next minute she was saying `they`. sorry to dissapoint you!
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