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A myth submitted to the site by Libby Brierley


Yawn,'I am your spirit' whispherd a howling shadow. Jenny had just woke-up because she thought she heard someone speak. She looked at her watch and read ;ten seconds to twelve. It was halloween and she thought the trick or treaters might of started early. What are you said Jenny? 'I am your spirit said the howling shadow .' 'I am the spirit of death , dissapointment , devastation and cruelty.' Then suddenly the shadow swooped away! The shadow had mumbled this so jenny did not however hear...

The next day, jenny had wondered about what had happened, she thought it was a dream . She was sure it was a dream actually she was possitive!
Jenny was a runaway because her parents argued a lot. She made a den from willow she had tered jeans, ripped t-shirt, tattered shoes.

Later that day the spirit came back, it pulled her with a twister(hurricane) and dropped her at a haunted mansion! The mansion looked very dark and it had stumps of trees surrounding it. But at the same time lovely lush grass. So she strolled up to it and dropped her bag's and she made sure she had her hair spray incase of a quick escape. As soon as she stepped in she could her the echo of voices and she could see skulls and bones from where people had died! She had forgot that today was halloween! When she turned the corner she saw devils!...

They saw her she sprayed her hairspray, to blind the devils, it created a misty fog. She was running for her life, as she stepped out of the mansion she could hear someone weeping. She was following the sound of the weeping, as she turned the corner she saw a cottage! And on the door step she saw a girl who was weeping. Can I see ? Yes sure. They seem to match ! Oh my we could be sisters!............

By Libby Brierley
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Name: Fiza 1st August 2012
Well, I did like your story but then who was the howling voice of?3 out of 5
Name: Becky 23rd March 2010
Oh my goodness,
That was so good,
I loved how you could have been sisters,
you know i have wrote a book called Sisters on this website, be sure to check it out.
well,
your story was really cool but also scary.
Name: Saffron 14th January 2010
What a great story! I love what you did at the end! Haha!
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